Which one do you think is the most important factor for a student to success at college or university?
1. Tutors in university
2. The encouragement from family and friends
3. High-quality education from high school
There is no doubt that in this sophisticated world in which we live, being successful needs many qualifications. One of the best ways to reach your goal and succeed in your life is going to university and be a specialized expert in a major. While some people believe that a supporting family or a well-scientific background is essential in this trajectory, I strongly believe that the role of tutors in this path is more integral. In the following paragraphs I will aptly elaborate on my reasons.
First of all, knowledgeable tutors are able to convey the data and information which is necessary to get involve with success. They are eligible and successful people somewhat that give them ability to help students. By way of example, as a chemical engineering student who wanted to succeed in his life, I tried hard to learn diverse skills and abilities in my major from my tutors. My teachers who endeavored in their lives, knew how teach us to be in the right path to achieve our goal as soon as possible. One of our tutors in the university not only taught us organic chemistry very well but he also demonstrated us how to find the solution of hard dilemma in our professional life by giving us many valuable skills such as critical thinking, time managing, and brain storming. Had I not had that good tutor, I would not have learnt those useful and practical skills.
Secondly, tutors are a vital key in social networks which is necessary to achieve success in professional career. Equally important as the knowledge and experiences, having an intricate and expanded network make teacher able to assist students to land a well-paid job after graduation which is so much important in success. I can recall, one of my teachers at the university who had a very wide connection with other experts not only in the academic field but at the industrial environment as well. He generously helped many of students and introduced them to diverse high-paced companies as an intern or a job applicant. As far as I know in all cases the students were successful to land a job. This connection actually was a boon for us students who easily could find a related job after graduation right away. As we can see tutor’s role in students' success is undeniable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
There is no doubt that in this sophistic...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I will aptly elaborate on my reasons. First of all, knowledgeable tutors are a...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt those useful and practical skills. Secondly, tutors are a vital key in soci...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
...achieve success in professional career. Equally important as the knowledge and experien...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 630, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...panies as an intern or a job applicant. As far as I know in all cases the students...
^^
Line 3, column 821, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...elated job after graduation right away. As we can see tutor’s role in students suc...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, no doubt, such as, first of all, in all cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7621483376 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88391495765 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544757033248 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8748389315 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.529411765 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199990196092 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578567752831 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031273336117 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125381033495 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048234738477 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.