TPO-18 - Integrated Writing Task In the 1950s Torreya taxifoha, a type of evergreen tree once very common in the state of Florida, started to die out. No one is sure exactly what caused the decline, but chances are good that if nothing is done, Torreya wi
The lecture and reading are both about Torreya taxifolia, a type of evergreen tree once very common in the state of Florida.The author stated that there are three ways to save the declining of the Torreya. However, the lecturer rebuts the claim of the author. He is of the opinion that these ways are not satisfactory to save the decline of Torreya.The lecturer cast doubt on the main point made in the reading by provoding three reasons.
To begin with, the author argues that the first way is to re-establish Torreya in the same location in which it thrived for thousand of years.Neveretheless, the lecturer refute this by mentioning that the location on which it is thrived for thousand of years are now affected by global warming.Furthermore,The current environement becomes drier.
Secondly,According to the reading the author stated that the second way is to move Torreya to an entirely different loaction.Howbeit, the lecturer stated that Black loctus is a tree which was moved to north for the purpose of change in location and properous growth of Black loctus, but such tree was expanded in new location in such a way that other species were in endangered.Moreover, other species were mostly extinct due to such move.
Finally, the author posist that the third way is to preserve Torreya in research centres. Nonethless, the lecturer believes that resereach areas are not viable to protect whole population of Torreya from diseases for long term.He feels that preservation in Research areas is not best solution to protect popultaion of Torreya.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nce very common in the state of Florida.The author stated that there are three way...
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...ommon in the state of Florida.The author stated that there are three ways to save...
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...sfactory to save the decline of Torreya.The lecturer cast doubt on the main point m...
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...e same location in which it thrived for thousand of years.Neveretheless, the lecturer re...
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... which it thrived for thousand of years.Neveretheless, the lecturer refute this by mentioning...
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...the location on which it is thrived for thousand of years are now affected by global war...
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...ears are now affected by global warming.Furthermore,The current environement becomes drier....
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...w affected by global warming.Furthermore,The current environement becomes drier. ...
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...rreya to an entirely different loaction.Howbeit, the lecturer stated that Black loctus ...
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...y that other species were in endangered.Moreover, other species were mostly extinct due ...
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... of Torreya from diseases for long term.He feels that preservation in Research are...
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... that preservation in Research areas is not best solution to protect popultaion of Torre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 30.3222958057 139% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1373.03311258 96% => OK
No of words: 256.0 270.72406181 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14453125 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22405509413 2.5805825403 125% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5078125 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 419.366225166 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 21.2450331126 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.838250568 49.2860985944 255% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 188.142857143 110.228320801 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.5714285714 21.698381199 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1428571429 7.06452816374 200% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332776124337 0.272083759551 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162359876242 0.0996497079465 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867347359518 0.0662205650399 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204424292452 0.162205337803 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597435050801 0.0443174109184 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 13.3589403974 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 53.8541721854 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.0289183223 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.498013245 156% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.