TPO 27
The reading and lecture are about explanation of little ice age. In the lecture, it is stated that hypothesis on the reading is superseded and scientists proved that these explanations are faulty.
To begin with, the author of the reading posits that melted glaciers caused big quantity of freezing water into the Gulf, causing the stream to heavily influence the climate. Nonetheless, lecturer notes that the current of stream would have influenced temperature of the Europe and North America. In fact, southern hemisphere of the earth witnessed the shift of temperature, which proves that this episode had not played significant role for the ice age.
Secondly, in the reading, it is mentioned that volcano eruption emitted substances, which blocks the energy of sun to reach the ground. Thereby, temperature decreased in light of insufficient amount of sunlight. By contrast, the lecturer states that if volcanoes had sent magnitude of gas, which is enough to prevent sunlight to reach surface of the earth, it would have posed visual effect. Actually, there are no report about visual effect of color, which proves that volcanoes did not emitted much amount of gases and occasioned temperature drop.
Finally, the author remarks that number of trees increased because of human population decrease. In addition, it is stated that bid body of trees absorbed magnitude of greenhouse gas, which makes the earth warm, and lack of the gas made the earth cooler. On the other hand, the lecturer refutes this idea by claiming number of human being increased after short span of time, and they continued decreasing quantity of trees. Thereby, he proves that short period of drop in human population did not posed the cool epoch.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 489, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'emit'
Suggestion: emit
...or, which proves that volcanoes did not emitted much amount of gases and occasioned tem...
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Line 7, column 498, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'pose'
Suggestion: pose
...iod of drop in human population did not posed the cool epoch.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, in addition, in fact, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1373.03311258 106% => OK
No of words: 281.0 270.72406181 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16725978648 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59114325706 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555160142349 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 419.366225166 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 2.5761589404 272% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0893691207 49.2860985944 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.692307692 110.228320801 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 21.698381199 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06452816374 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285126584031 0.272083759551 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905415927469 0.0996497079465 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541744250331 0.0662205650399 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154877564779 0.162205337803 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336661741426 0.0443174109184 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 63.6247240618 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.7273730684 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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