TPO-41 - Integrated Writing Task Burning coal in power plants produces a waste product called coal ash, a material that contains small amounts of potentially harmful chemicals Environmentalists in the United States are concerned about the damage such harm

The reading and lecture are both discuss about coal ash, which is a product of burning coal. The author of the reading believes that disposal of coal ash have some regulations, awareness about recycling coal ash use and costing for disposal regulation are essential. The lecture casts doubt on the claims made in the article. He think that regulation are essential for old and new plant, increase awareness about use of recycle coal ash and cosh of plantain are not too much high at individual level.

First of all, the reading claim that power company have already effective environmental regulation that reduce the soil and environmental contamination.In case of newly built disposal pond or landfill have liner for regulations of coal ash. this point challenged by the lecture. lecturer say that liner regulation system are exist new pond and landfill, but not used for old one. That's why regulation need for old disposal point to save the soil and ground water.

Secondly, the author content that strict rules are discourage people to recycle coal ash to other product. because when they obey the strict rules for recycle people have miss perception about the by product of coal ash. the lecture rebuts this point by strict rules are not created miss perception about use of product. on the other hand it give relief from tension about danger of by product from coal ash.

Finally, the author stats that new regulation are increase the cost of handling and disposal for power company. for that reason company increase the rat of electricity that is not welcome by general people. on the other hand the lecture posit that if cost of handling and disposal have increased 15 billion $ that not affect the general public because there electric bill increase only 1% that is not a big dill.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e regulations, awareness about recycling coal ash use and costing for disposal re...
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Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... for disposal regulation are essential. The lecture casts doubt on the claims made ...
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Line 1, column 331, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
...t on the claims made in the article. He think that regulation are essential for old a...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...he soil and environmental contamination.In case of newly built disposal pond or la...
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Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...have liner for regulations of coal ash. this point challenged by the lecture. lectur...
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Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lecturer
.... this point challenged by the lecture. lecturer say that liner regulation system are ex...
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Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'saith', 'says'.
Suggestion: saith; says
...int challenged by the lecture. lecturer say that liner regulation system are exist ...
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Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
...er say that liner regulation system are exist new pond and landfill, but not used for...
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Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...and landfill, but not used for old one. Thats why regulation need for old disposal po...
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Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...e to recycle coal ash to other product. because when they obey the strict rules for re...
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Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ther product. because when they obey the strict rules for recycle people have mis...
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Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ption about the by product of coal ash. the lecture rebuts this point by strict rul...
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Line 5, column 323, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...d miss perception about use of product. on the other hand it give relief from tens...
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Line 5, column 344, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gives'?
Suggestion: gives
...ut use of product. on the other hand it give relief from tension about danger of by ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ut danger of by product from coal ash. Finally, the author stats that new regul...
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Line 7, column 113, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...andling and disposal for power company. for that reason company increase the rat o...
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Line 7, column 116, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ling and disposal for power company. for that reason company increase the rat of ...
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Line 7, column 209, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
... that is not welcome by general people. on the other hand the lecture posit that i...
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Line 7, column 331, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...reased 15 billion $ that not affect the general public because there electric bill increase on...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rease only 1% that is not a big dill.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1373.03311258 109% => OK
No of words: 303.0 270.72406181 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94059405941 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46988220908 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478547854785 0.540411800872 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 419.366225166 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6465800919 49.2860985944 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8 110.228320801 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 21.698381199 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06452816374 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 4.19205298013 477% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.580698493708 0.272083759551 213% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202714791133 0.0996497079465 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121157684237 0.0662205650399 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.344729674967 0.162205337803 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825201442958 0.0443174109184 186% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.3589403974 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.42419426049 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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