tpo 44 the silver coin brought to North America by the Norse

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tpo 44 the silver coin brought to North America by the Norse

The material discusses if the silver coin that was discovered in the state of Maine related to the Norse or not. While the reading claims three reasons to cast doubt that this coin was brought to North America by the Norse, the listening challenges this and points out that many archaeologists believe that this coin is genuine evidence that the Norse got in contact with the North Americans.

First, the author mentions that the Norse settled in eastern Canada which is far away from Maine. On the other hand, the professor opposes this and brings up that other objects that were found in North America, had been brought from long distances. Furthermore, the lecturer adds that the Norse traveled great distances to discover various places, so may be they reached North America, obtaining this coin with them.

Second, the writer states that they do not find other coins in the Canadian sites, where the Norse settled. On the contrary, the lecturer encounters this and cites that the Norse were not willing for a permanent stay in Canada, so they might bring their stuff with them, but they took them back when they left. According to the lecture, the Norse brought coins with them, but when they decided to return, they packed up all their coins back with them.

Third, the reading posits that the North Americans did not use these coins as money, so the Norse did not need to bring these coins with them. Conversely, the professor contradicts this and contends that the Norse knew that North Americans valued all attractive and beautiful objects. The lecture says that these coins were beautiful, so North Americans could use them as necklaces or jewelers. The professor adds that the Norse could bring these coins with them to trade with the North Americans.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
...istances to discover various places, so may be they reached North America, obtaining t...
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Line 7, column 499, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...them to trade with the North Americans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, third, while, on the contrary, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 12.0772626932 166% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 22.412803532 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1373.03311258 107% => OK
No of words: 301.0 270.72406181 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87707641196 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23158399092 2.5805825403 86% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495016611296 0.540411800872 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 419.366225166 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7834198191 49.2860985944 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.333333333 110.228320801 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0833333333 21.698381199 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06452816374 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.467700727656 0.272083759551 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199869973398 0.0996497079465 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753755752485 0.0662205650399 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.307014325752 0.162205337803 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545569469159 0.0443174109184 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 53.8541721854 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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