tpo 45
the bee existing on earth as early as 200 million years ago is very likely to be true and the several arguments that make doubt about that are not very convincing. the first reason, if no fossil remains of actual bees have ever been found that date to 200 million years ago is because there was not the three liquid of a tree that help bee's fossil to preserve. the second reason, it is true that flowering plants did not exist but the bees could feed by non flowering plants until the flowering plants evolve so absence of flowering plants is not a good reason for not existing the bees. the third reason, the nest chamber might be made by bees because they have been used some waterproof substance for creating their nest. so that suggest the fossilized structures were made by other insects, such as wood boring beetles is not exactly correct.
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...tree that help bees fossil to preserve. the second reason, it is true that flowerin...
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... good reason for not existing the bees. the third reason, the nest chamber might be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, third, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 22.412803532 40% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 30.3222958057 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 693.0 1373.03311258 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 153.0 270.72406181 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52941176471 5.08290768461 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 4.04702891845 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16042486601 2.5805825403 84% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 145.348785872 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614379084967 0.540411800872 114% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 419.366225166 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0662251656 38% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 21.2450331126 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.6543658595 49.2860985944 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.6 110.228320801 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6 21.698381199 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06452816374 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.09492273731 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363315234163 0.272083759551 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185450459053 0.0996497079465 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119858479782 0.0662205650399 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.363315234163 0.162205337803 224% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.3589403974 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 53.8541721854 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.0289183223 114% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.59 12.2367328918 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 63.6247240618 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.7273730684 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.498013245 133% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
Read sample essays from ETS:
http://www.testbig.com/users/toeflwritingmaster
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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