TPO 47
The reading and listening are both about fly capability of Pterosaurs.The author of reading declares that fly for Pterosaurs id impossible.The lecturer casts doubt on claims the made in the article.Professor thinks that some researches exhibit Pterosaurs could fly.
first,Although the author of reading states that Pterosaurs were cold-blood like modern reptiles ,that why they could not produce adequate energy to fly due to slow metabolism and flight require lot of energy.The professor counters that argument by asserting that their body covered by fur and hair consequently Pterosaurs body kept warm and this caused to increase the body temperature and supply sufficient energy to fly.
second,While the reading mentions that weight restriction did not allow to Pterosaurs to fly and he strongly believes that Pterosaurs were so heavy.The lecturer insist that not only did not they are heavy but also they were light because they had hollow.Hollow made their weight low in order to fly.
third,In contrast to reading,which claims that they were unable to take off becuase they could not run fast or jumping like birds,the lecturer states that there is a difference between birds and Pterosaurs.Birds walk and run with two lems,whereas Pterosaurs walk with four lems.This ability did enable Pterosaurs to fly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...both about fly capability of Pterosaurs.The author of reading declares that fly for...
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...s that fly for Pterosaurs id impossible.The lecturer casts doubt on claims the made...
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...s that fly for Pterosaurs id impossible.The lecturer casts doubt on claims the made...
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Suggestion: Professor
...doubt on claims the made in the article.Professor thinks that some researches exhibit Pte...
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...searches exhibit Pterosaurs could fly. first,Although the author of reading states t...
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...hes exhibit Pterosaurs could fly. first,Although the author of reading states that Ptero...
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...urs were cold-blood like modern reptiles ,that why they could not produce adequate...
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...bolism and flight require lot of energy.The professor counters that argument by ass...
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...counters that argument by asserting that their body covered by fur and hair conse...
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...e and supply sufficient energy to fly. second,While the reading mentions that weight ...
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...supply sufficient energy to fly. second,While the reading mentions that weight restri...
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... believes that Pterosaurs were so heavy.The lecturer insist that not only did not t...
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...t Pterosaurs were so heavy.The lecturer insist that not only did not they are heavy bu...
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Suggestion: Hollow
...they were light because they had hollow.Hollow made their weight low in order to fly. ...
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...made their weight low in order to fly. third,In contrast to reading,which claims tha...
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...their weight low in order to fly. third,In contrast to reading,which claims that t...
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...er to fly. third,In contrast to reading,which claims that they were unable to take of...
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...could not run fast or jumping like birds,the lecturer states that there is a differe...
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Suggestion: Birds
...difference between birds and Pterosaurs.Birds walk and run with two lems,whereas Pter...
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...rosaurs.Birds walk and run with two lems,whereas Pterosaurs walk with four lems.This abi...
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...,whereas Pterosaurs walk with four lems.This ability did enable Pterosaurs to fly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, second, so, third, whereas, while, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 1373.03311258 81% => OK
No of words: 205.0 270.72406181 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4243902439 5.08290768461 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06752869623 2.5805825403 119% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 145.348785872 84% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59512195122 0.540411800872 110% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 419.366225166 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 13.0662251656 31% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 51.0 21.2450331126 240% => Sentence length is too long
Sentence length SD: 59.3422277977 49.2860985944 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 278.0 110.228320801 252% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.25 21.698381199 236% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.5 7.06452816374 347% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 4.19205298013 501% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282064580697 0.272083759551 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170447633401 0.0996497079465 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402939727618 0.0662205650399 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170447633401 0.162205337803 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402939727618 0.0443174109184 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.7 13.3589403974 222% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 53.8541721854 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.0289183223 210% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 12.2367328918 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.42419426049 120% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 63.6247240618 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 10.7273730684 266% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.498013245 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.2008830022 268% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.