The reading and the lecture are both about the humpback whales migrate long distances for feeding and copulation purposes; which is how animals migrate long ways in one direction. The author of the reading believe that may be the humpback whales navigating by the stars. The lecturer casts doubts on the claims made in the article. He thinks that follow the stars is by the instinct and is absurd belief that it is a measure of the intelligence.
First of all, the author claims that humpback whales’ brain have hight standard and is complex to define them intelligence. The reader believes that whales are smart over other animals. This point is challenged by the lecturer. He says by the real connection of the intelligence and follow the stars is only by instinct. Furthermore, he points out nothing its nothing do with the intelligence.
Secondly, the author states animals can maintain movement and go in a straight direction for long distances only if they orient themselves by some outside objects or forces. And he says humpback whales migrate in straight lines.
The lecture rebuts this argument. He says other animals follow the stars for navigation and it isn’t connection at all, and its only an instinct acquired when they were born. He elaborates on this by mentioning that ducks follows also the stars for navigation.
Finally, the author mentions that humpback whales present an unusual behavior known as spy-hopping, and it is very strange to see in the marine animals. He is of the opinion that they are sometimes observe floating with the heads above the water, and at the same time they were looking the stars.
The lecturer on the other hand, list that some animals have the magnetic field were the brain is connected by external force. He puts forth the idea that spy-hopping it is not necessary for follow the stars.
In conclusion, the lecture cast doubts on all the claims and theories presented in the reading.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The reading and the lecture are both abo...
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Line 1, column 280, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...mpback whales navigating by the stars. The lecturer casts doubts on the claims mad...
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Line 1, column 407, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
... stars is by the instinct and is absurd believe that its a measure of the intelligence....
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Line 1, column 420, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...the instinct and is absurd believe that its a measure of the intelligence. ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t its a measure of the intelligence. First of all, the author claims that hum...
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Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
...to define them intelligence. The reader believe that whales are smart over other animal...
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Line 3, column 349, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'points'.
Suggestion: points
...rs is only by instinct. Furthermore, he point out nothing its nothing do with the int...
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Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g its nothing do with the intelligence. Secondly, the author states animals...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...llows also the stars for navigation. Finally, the author mentions that humpba...
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Line 8, column 205, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'observed'.
Suggestion: observed
... of the opinion that they are sometimes observe floating with the heads above the water...
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Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'the lecture'.
Suggestion: the lecture
...for follow the stars. In conclusion, the lecture the lecture cast doubts on all the claims and theor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.01324503311 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1373.03311258 119% => OK
No of words: 330.0 270.72406181 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9696969697 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6072583576 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478787878788 0.540411800872 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 419.366225166 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6715861661 49.2860985944 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3157894737 110.228320801 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3684210526 21.698381199 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47368421053 7.06452816374 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.09492273731 171% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412963459827 0.272083759551 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121920943226 0.0996497079465 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967766222075 0.0662205650399 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201386513083 0.162205337803 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11222876941 0.0443174109184 253% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.3589403974 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.42419426049 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 63.6247240618 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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