TPO 54
The reading passage and the lecture both talk about the desalination process of salton lake in America. The passage indicates three possible solutions which can reduce the salinity and save the fish and bird living in this lake. But the lecturer cast doubt on the solutions that has been given by the passage.
The author says that one most helpful solution of desalination is passing the lake water into desalination facilities and evaporation of water and cooled the esteem into pure water. The lecturer thinks that it might cause severe health problem because by this process poisonous selenium(Se) can be mixed with water from air when evaporation occur.
Secondly the passage mentions about pipe line that would be helpful if sea water can mix with this lake water to dilute the salty lake water. But the lecture says that it will not so convincing, this process requires long pipeline about 100 km that would be so expensive to establish, which is impossible.
Thirdly, the passage mention that if several wall can be built into the lake it would reduce the salinity, on the other hand the lecture claims that the lake’s position is in a geographic area whereas earthquake is frequent phenomena. So if earthquake happens frequently it can causes damage to the wall.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'will' requires base form of the verb: 'convince'
Suggestion: convince
...ut the lecture says that it will not so convincing, this process requires long pipeline ab...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 38, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun wall seems to be countable; consider using: 'several walls'.
Suggestion: several walls
... Thirdly, the passage mention that if several wall can be built into the lake it would red...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 241, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ereas earthquake is frequent phenomena. So if earthquake happens frequently it can ca...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 284, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'cause'
Suggestion: cause
...if earthquake happens frequently it can causes damage to the wall.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 1373.03311258 78% => OK
No of words: 214.0 270.72406181 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00934579439 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52031660858 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 145.348785872 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556074766355 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 419.366225166 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3388517946 49.2860985944 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.111111111 110.228320801 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7777777778 21.698381199 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 7.06452816374 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 63.6247240618 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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