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There are many debate among whether the humpbacks navigate using stars or not. The lecture says that the humpbacks are migrating by using other ways rather than the stars. However, the reading argues that the humpbacks migrate by navigating by using the stars and enumerates three reasons of support.
The first point of dispute is that humpbacks are intelligent enough to use stars as a navigator while they are migrating. The lecture says that there is no connection between how humpbacks are intelligent and between their ability to use the stars while they are migrating. For example ducks are not so intelligent and they are able to migrate as well. However, the reading argues that humpbacks brains have a high degree of complexity of intelligent, that is why they could migrate by using the stars.
Another controversial issue is that the humpbacks navigate in straight-line. The lecture says that humpbacks move in straight lines because the have some internal biomagnified force in their body. This biomagnified force is sensitive to the earth magnetic field that help them to move in straight line while they are migrate. But, the reading disagrees by saying that the humpbacks move in straight lines because they are orientated by some external feature like land marks.
The final point of dispute is that the humpbacks have an unusual behavior called sap hoppy. The lecture says that the some other animals like sharks have the same behavior and they do not migrate or even look at the stars. Sharks do that spy hoppy in the morning while there are no stars in the sky. Yet, the reading contradicts this point saying that humpbacks are doing this behavior to help them looking at the sky while they migrate from one place to another.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many debates
There are many debate among whether the humpbacks navigate u...
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There are many debate among whether the humpbacks navigate using sta...
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...re says that the humpbacks are migrating by using other ways rather than the star...
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...r, the reading argues that the humpbacks migrate by navigating by using the star...
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...umpbacks migrate by navigating by using the stars and enumerates three reasons o...
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... enumerates three reasons of support. The first point of dispute is that hump...
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...support. The first point of dispute is that humpbacks are intelligent enough...
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...wever, the reading argues that humpbacks brains have a high degree of complexity ...
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...hey could migrate by using the stars. Another controversial issue is that the ...
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...to move in straight line while they are migrate. But, the reading disagrees by saying t...
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...ome external feature like land marks. The final point of dispute is that the h...
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...l point of dispute is that the humpbacks have an unusual behavior called sap ho...
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...e is that the humpbacks have an unusual behavior called sap hoppy. The lecture ...
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...the humpbacks have an unusual behavior called sap hoppy. The lecture says that ...
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...led sap hoppy. The lecture says that the some other animals like sharks have the ...
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...ior and they do not migrate or even look at the stars. Sharks do that spy hoppy i...
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...re no stars in the sky. Yet, the reading contradicts this point saying that humpb...
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...radicts this point saying that humpbacks are doing this behavior to help them loo...
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to look' or 'look'.
Suggestion: to look; look
...s are doing this behavior to help them looking at the sky while they migrate from one ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, so, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.4613686534 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1373.03311258 110% => OK
No of words: 301.0 270.72406181 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00332225914 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60066479135 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 145.348785872 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448504983389 0.540411800872 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 419.366225166 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.938709178 49.2860985944 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.4 110.228320801 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 21.698381199 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 7.06452816374 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 4.19205298013 453% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345768133235 0.272083759551 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139382388957 0.0996497079465 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440780365575 0.0662205650399 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222136601579 0.162205337803 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456128324241 0.0443174109184 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.42419426049 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 63.6247240618 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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