TPO58
The reading text and lecture are both about the fighter Spartacus. While, the author feels that Spartacus was the real hero for the common peoples. Although, lecturer disputers all these claims made by the author and his position is that, mentioned facts aer based on the stories, and these stories are not real.
First of all, the reading text suggests that, main goal of the Spartacus was to successfully returning back to their motherland with the numerous slaves, which are present in Roman's cage. However, the lecturer claim that, returning to the homeland was not the main goal, he many time got the opportunity to escape from the roman territory but, he marching toward the roman instead from leaving that region. Additionally, he states that major motive of Spartacus to take revange and theft all the wealth of romans empire.
Secondly, passage argues that, Spartacus was a great military leader. It is also said that, He firstly, won the many battle against the roman because of his wise intellectual. In contrast to that, professor believe that, in the first the roman empire was taking a Spartacus as a amature fighter, so that they send out the less trained militart men to fought against him. But, after losses the several battle roman empire sent out his best fighter, at that time Spartacus losses was defeated by the roman.
Furthermore, The writer said that, Spartacus was a hero for the local people because he liberal many slave and saved the basic human right of them. On the other hand, tutor point out that, this facts are only based on the narrative, it does not have any historical background. On top of that, these tails are created by the early antislavery movement. During this time leader of that movement, is finding some great leader who was fought against the slavery, so in their research they found the name of Spartacus. After that, they created a narrative that, he was the great leader, to rainforsed the movement.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returning'.
Suggestion: returning
...al of the Spartacus was to successfully returning back to their motherland with the numerous s...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
... the homeland was not the main goal, he many time got the opportunity to escape from the ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun battle seems to be countable; consider using: 'many battles'.
Suggestion: many battles
... is also said that, He firstly, won the many battle against the roman because of his wise i...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 278, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... roman empire was taking a Spartacus as a amature fighter, so that they send out ...
^
Line 7, column 190, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...n the other hand, tutor point out that, this facts are only based on the narrative, ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, second, secondly, so, while, as to, in contrast, first of all, in contrast to, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 12.0772626932 166% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 22.412803532 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 30.3222958057 139% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1373.03311258 119% => OK
No of words: 333.0 270.72406181 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88888888889 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38852976616 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 145.348785872 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525525525526 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 419.366225166 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 2.5761589404 349% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9630587685 49.2860985944 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.533333333 110.228320801 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 21.698381199 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7333333333 7.06452816374 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 4.33554083885 254% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363248549813 0.272083759551 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133184789793 0.0996497079465 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729543678258 0.0662205650399 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229826160723 0.162205337803 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859580857939 0.0443174109184 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.3589403974 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 63.6247240618 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returning'.
Suggestion: returning
...al of the Spartacus was to successfully returning back to their motherland with the numerous s...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
... the homeland was not the main goal, he many time got the opportunity to escape from the ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun battle seems to be countable; consider using: 'many battles'.
Suggestion: many battles
... is also said that, He firstly, won the many battle against the roman because of his wise i...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 278, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... roman empire was taking a Spartacus as a amature fighter, so that they send out ...
^
Line 7, column 190, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...n the other hand, tutor point out that, this facts are only based on the narrative, ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, second, secondly, so, while, as to, in contrast, first of all, in contrast to, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 12.0772626932 166% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 22.412803532 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 30.3222958057 139% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1373.03311258 119% => OK
No of words: 333.0 270.72406181 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88888888889 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38852976616 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 145.348785872 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525525525526 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 419.366225166 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 2.5761589404 349% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9630587685 49.2860985944 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.533333333 110.228320801 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 21.698381199 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7333333333 7.06452816374 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 4.33554083885 254% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363248549813 0.272083759551 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133184789793 0.0996497079465 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729543678258 0.0662205650399 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229826160723 0.162205337803 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859580857939 0.0443174109184 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.3589403974 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 63.6247240618 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.