Write about what customs in Vietnam that foreigners should know.
Vietnam is a beautiful and charming country that maintains many magical kinds of stuff, and delicious food. Vietnam has been a good choice for foreigners who tend to go on vacation. However, before travelling, you should acknowledge some Vietnam fundamental customs. There are some important things that you have better do or not do when you first arrive in Vietnam. First of all, when you visit someone at home, you have better call them first. The reason why you have to do this is that the host needs time to redecorate their house and prepare for their guests. They have an acquire to serve their guests their best position, and make you feel as you are at home. Secondly, upon your purchase and look for souvenirs, and clothes, it would be a great experience for you to bargain all things you would afford. You've admitted that you know the way to save time and money.
On the other hand, customs in Vietnam are different from those in other countries. Therefore, you have to comprehend these unique customs. If you are visiting a pagoda or temple, it is not acceptable to take photos. People believe that this action would interfere their rituals. When someone give you a gift, don't open it in front of the givers. And remember that you shouldn't kiss friends on the cheek when meeting them. That may create a bad images to your friends and people.
In conclusion, when travelling to Vietnam, with the expectation of having a great experience, you should follow these customs. These would be exceptional customs to you, but these are Vietnam traditions and customs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...and prepare for their guests. They have an acquire to serve their guests their best positi...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: You've
...to bargain all things you would afford. Youve admitted that you know the way to save ...
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Line 2, column 293, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gives'.
Suggestion: gives
...d interfere their rituals. When someone give you a gift, dont open it in front of th...
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Line 2, column 310, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... rituals. When someone give you a gift, dont open it in front of the givers. And rem...
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Line 2, column 369, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...nt of the givers. And remember that you shouldnt kiss friends on the cheek when meeting ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, you know, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 22.412803532 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1373.03311258 95% => OK
No of words: 272.0 270.72406181 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77941176471 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44869501295 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573529411765 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 419.366225166 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.51434878587 330% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5105167652 49.2860985944 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.2222222222 110.228320801 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1111111111 21.698381199 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94444444444 7.06452816374 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 4.33554083885 254% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109853638253 0.272083759551 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425938321358 0.0996497079465 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520474351035 0.0662205650399 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888528397057 0.162205337803 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382305888595 0.0443174109184 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.3589403974 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 53.8541721854 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.0289183223 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 12.2367328918 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.42419426049 86% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 63.6247240618 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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