Your friend has just won a sizeable amount of money in the lottery. He/she would like your advice as how to spend it.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
Congratulate him/her on their win
Give practical advice on how to spend the money
Advice him/her on benefits/drawbacks associated with large wins.
Dear David,
I hope you are doing well! I was totally surprised after receiving a letter from you stating that you have won a £2 billion in ‘EuroMillion’ lottery draw last week. And, I am very pleased to provide you some suggestions on how to spend this winning money efficiently.
I know that it is very difficult to think on the ways of spending this huge amount of cash suddenly. After analyzing the methods, I came across some suggestions and opinions from my side to utilize this amount wisely. As you know, some previous lottery winners had invested their money for the sake of their c...
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Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 10
No. of Words: 242 200
No. of Characters: 1114 1000
No. of Different Words: 151 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.944 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.603 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.549 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 75 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 53 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 28 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 19 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.133 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.326 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.337 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.648 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.187 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4