You did a one day course at a local college, but you are unhappy about it.
Write a letter to the principal of the college. In your letter,
- Details about the course
- Why you are unhappy
- Give some suggestions
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about the one day computer course, which I attended in your college, last week. It was a 8 hour crash course organized for those who are interested to learn about Microsoft Office programs.
There are three major reasons behind my discontent for this course. Firstly, it started an hour later than the scheduled time and this time was not compensated at the end. Owing to this, the tutor has skipped some important lessons. Secondly, the version of Microsoft Office used for teaching was very old. Nowadays, the 2010 version is read...
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