Throughout the history, male leaders often made the society more violent and conflicting. If women governed the world, it would be a more peaceful world. To what extend do you agree or disagree? Give an example to support your idea.
In current political situation, some people argue that male leaders are often catalyst for society becomes more aggressive and clash, while others suppose leviathan position should belong to women. Personally, I prefer to cogitate both arguments whereby provide a synthesis.
It is undeniable that men are consistently elected being a leader for almost every country across the globe. Culture, belief and folklore, which appear surrounding locus, could be strong influence why some societies favored to elect men instead of women. Literally, if the citizens who have affiliation to those factors ...
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Thank you sir
-bije-
You are welcome, Bije!
You are welcome, Bije!
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