The charts below give information about attendance at entertainment venues and admission prices to those venues in 2009.
Summarise the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Given are two figures comparing the number of people visiting sports, theme parks and cinemas in 2009 as well as the admission prices to these places. It is clear from the information provided that movie theatres were by far the most popular entertainment destination and the tickets for football events were more expensive than that of other activities.
More specifically, cinemas came top in terms of attendance, reaching more than 1000 thousand visitors. In addition, well under 400 thousand people visited theme parks which was doubl...
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