People in modern societies are increasingly finding themselves under greater pressure and having less leisure time. What do you think are the reasons for this?
With the fast pace of life in modern society, many people complain that they have less time to entertain themselves and it is difficult to free themselves from tremendous pressure. What factors lead to this unpleasant phenomenon and what we can do to solve this problem have become a concern.
Economists claim that fierce competition makes people have to work hard to survive, otherwise we will probably be thrown out of the game and become losers. This kind of competition has begun since we were very young when we were sent to the the prestigious schools to pursue a better education so that we...
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Sentence: This kind of competition has begun since we were very young when we were sent to the the prestigious schools to pursue a better education so that we could gain an edge over our competitors for a more comfortable job with palatable income.
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