Write a letter to you supervisor asking for a one-day leave, so that you could help your friend. In your letter
- Describe the problem of your friend.
- Say how you are going to help him/her.
- Suggest how you will complete work tasks on the requested date
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to inform you that Friday First of July, I need take break for whole day. I shall be back to work on Monday fourth of July.
My best friend Sara is going to move to London very soon. She is a single mom and has a little boy. She has to complete her master thesis before move, but she cannot because of her son. Unfortunately, her son is on Mari Sent hospital because his leg was broken. I want go to hospital and take care of little John. Besides, I want to give a hand on packing and help her to finish her thesis.
I will try to complete my tasks before Friday. However, I will have full access to the internet at during this time, so I can finish my uncompleted duties via the internet and send my daily report to you.
I will like be glad if you can kindly accept my request.
Yours faithfully,
Mari.
- Many people these days travel far for work or spend more hours working. Does this trend have more advantages or disadvantages? What do you think about work-life balance? 65
- Write a letter to your manager about a new colleague who makes things difficult at work for all of your team Describe why he she makes it difficult Describe your feelings regarding the situation What do you want your manager to do about it 78
- In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this 57
- A country is experiencing population growth and needs more homes. Should these new homes be constructed in the existing cities or should new towns be built for this purpose? Explain. 63
- In today s competitive world many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income others feel they lack support because of their parents absence 66
Sentence: I will like be glad if you can kindly accept my request.
Description: A verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive is not usually followed by a verb 'to be', infinitive or imperative
Suggestion: Refer to like and be
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.364 21.0
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 10
No. of Words: 158 200
No. of Characters: 615 1000
No. of Different Words: 98 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.545 4.0
Average Word Length: 3.892 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.055 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 40 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 15 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 8 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 2 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.364 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.613 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.455 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.39 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.626 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.254 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4