Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Modern technology is creating a single world culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Over the past decades, breakthroughs in the technological field have expanded the range of products and services available to mankind. These include advances in communication methods and travel opportunities which are ultimately linking the world into a global village defined by a mix of cultures instead of a single dominating culture.
On one hand, while televisions enable individuals from one corner of the world to obtain a snapshot of the customs and traditions of their peers from the other side of the globe, the increasing availability of computers and the world wide web is transforming ...
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