228 Describe a house/apartment that someone you know lives in.
You should say:
whose house/apartment this is
where the house/apartment is
what it looks like inside
and explain what you like or dislike about this person's house/ apartment
| Post dates | Users | rates | Contents |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-04-30 | rezafathi | Check this speaking | |
| 2017-09-05 | EugeneDubinchuk | 90.00 | Check this speaking |
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Comments
Hello,
Hello,
I could not understand what I should alter in my answers to get a higher score. It seems that I covered all the points but the score is low. I need your guidance. Thank you.
As we told you have two main
As we told you have two main issues:
1. hesitations with 'ehn' in the speeches.
2. off the topic, like the first question: 'whose house/apartment this is'. It is not related to the mortgage. You can relatively talk more than other users, other users just can't talk, but when you talk a lot, it may run out of the track.
Once you remove those two issues, the scores can be higher. You don't need to alter you answers.
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Also In part II, the first two questions can put less time, more time should put on last two questions.
6.5 out of 9
for the question 'whose house/apartment this is', it doesn't need to talk about mortgage.