Write a letter to the cinema manager to inform him/her that you have lost your bag in the cinema. In your letter
- Tell exactly what happened and when.
- Where do you think you left the bag?
- Ask the manager to help find the bag.
Dear Sir/Madam,
The reason I am writing to you is that I have lost my bag in the cinema yesterday evening.
Last week, some of my friends informed me that cinema is going to show one of the famous movies called Life of Pie on the weekend around 5pm. Last day, 21th of April, when I arrived to cinema, the movie had just begun. Consequently, I bought a ticket and something for eating.
My chair was located on row number 7, chair number 15. When I sat on my chair, I put my bag on my legs; I usually do not do that, so I think my bag was fallen down when the movie ended and I did not notice.
My bag is a common student bag, its color is black and there is some bock of my university inside it. Besides, there is a t-shirt and some stamp too.
If you found it could you please call me on 1234548 or email me at rr@ff.com.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Mari.
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The reason I am writing to you is that I have lost my bag ...
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flaws:
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 10
No. of Words: 163 200
No. of Characters: 619 1000
No. of Different Words: 103 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.573 4.0
Average Word Length: 3.798 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.067 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 38 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 19 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 5 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 4 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.818 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.89 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.364 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.393 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.682 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.174 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4