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D/A Technology designed to make our life simpler actually makes our life more complicated.
Born in the 21st century, I always regard technology as something that contributes to a simpler life. Technology makes it possible for us to know all the happenings under the sun without stepping outside the door. From my perspective, it offers us convenience which keeps us away from troublesome. Therefore, I totally disagree with the statement that technology actually makes our life more complicated.
First of all, technology such as telephone leads to the tendency of working at home. As you see, today nothing could be more tiresome than working at office. You have to be sandwiched between ...
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