Fewer and fewer young people are choosing to become a teacher. Why do young people do not want to become teachers? How this could be changed?
The rate of youngsters choosing teaching as a profession is declining rapidly. This essay suggests that teaching can often come across as less paying and this could be changed by compensating teachers adequately for the work they produce.
Firstly, teachers are not paid for the work that they produce. It is evident that, unlike state-owned schools, privately funded schools do not pay sufficiently for teachers and they do not get pension facilities. Most schools from developing nations are not state-owned and the salary that they provide does not attract many new candidates for the job. Furthermore, privately funded schools do not provide retirement plans for teaching. For example, In Sri Lanka, schools that are owned by the government, once a certain age is completed, they offer retirement every month, however, schools that are private does not provide such facilities.
The aforementioned problem can be solved by providing adequate salaries for the teachers and furthermore, governments can provide all the benefits irrespective of the school that the teachers teach in. Unlike state-owned schools, private schools do not pay their staff from taxpayers money, salaries of the teachers are paid by the student's tuition. Therefore, the school's tuition fees can be increased to pay the staff. Similarly, governments should pay incentives and other benefits that they provide to government school teachers.
To conclude, more and more youngsters are opting not to choose teaching as a profession. One of the main problems for this is teachers are not paid sufficiently and governments do not provide benefits for certain teachers. These problems can be mitigated, firstly, institutions should leverage enough capital to pay their tutors, and governments should provide benefits to all the teachers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 33, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to teach'.
Suggestion: to teach
The rate of youngsters choosing teaching as a profession is declining rapidly. T...
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Line 1, column 154, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...can often come across as less paying and this could be changed by compensating te...
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Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...alaries of the teachers are paid by the students tuition. Therefore, the schools tuition...
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Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'schools'' or 'school's'?
Suggestion: schools'; school's
...by the students tuition. Therefore, the schools tuition fees can be increased to pay th...
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Line 4, column 64, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to teach'.
Suggestion: to teach
...ore youngsters are opting not to choose teaching as a profession. One of the main proble...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, similarly, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47857142857 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90768685679 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467857142857 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2760805436 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.571428571 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136243517049 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602161700024 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05013281514 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102157311144 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267632619053 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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