You saw an advertisement for a tennis course in England but you have one or two problems and can’t say the whole course.
Write a letter to the course director. In your letter:
-Explain your interest in the course
-Describe your problems
-Find out if a refund is possible
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you with regards to an advertisement in a local newspaper dated 15th Jan 2014 about a tennis course starting 01st feb 2014.
I am very much interested in joining this course and I have basic knowledge about the sports. I was part of five member team during my school days and represented my school in inter school tennis tournament in my country. I always wanted to join a professional course like the one you have mentioned in your advertisement but there is one problem in joining this course. I will be moving to London from 1st April 2014 and t...
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