Torreya
You've just read about three ways to save Torreya taxifolia
The lecturer disagrees with the experts opinions about how to avoid torreya taxifolia to become extint. there are the following three reasons for that.
First, the lecturer states that the global warming and climate changes have modified the Norther Florida's microclimate. The higher temperatures have changed the previously damped areas into drained areas now. Therefore, the current microclimate of this region that once was favorable to torreya's growth is not anymore.
Second, it is stated that assisted migration, which means to move torreya to a different location, would be not a suitable way to preserve the species because it would cost a high price. The lecturer gives the example of another species assisted migration that ended causing the death of the native species in the area.
Third, the lecturer explain that although plants can be closely monitored by scientists in research centers, there are not large population and variety of the species there. this way, torreya would not survive to diseases in research center's conditions.
To sum up, the lecturer believes that experts ways to avoid torreya's extinction are not suitable or efficient.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, therefore, third, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 22.412803532 49% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 1373.03311258 73% => OK
No of words: 183.0 270.72406181 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49180327869 5.08290768461 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 4.04702891845 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5921460678 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 145.348785872 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628415300546 0.540411800872 116% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 419.366225166 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4492078501 49.2860985944 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 110.228320801 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 21.698381199 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06452816374 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193444828361 0.272083759551 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771565824516 0.0996497079465 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720161724667 0.0662205650399 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113839706703 0.162205337803 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588432035181 0.0443174109184 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.3589403974 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.8541721854 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.2367328918 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.42419426049 117% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.