Causes and effects of illegal immigration.
Immigration is a normal phenomenan of human society from the last centuries. However, besides legal immigrants, illegal immigration is becoming a sever issue of many countries in the world. It is illegal immigration has brought bad consequences for not only destinations but also immigrants’ original countries. Inspite of those results, there are a lot of people still try to move to another country by an illegal way, and the following reasons may explain for this issue.
First of all, money is significant basis which encourages many people to immigrate in a illicit method. Emigrants move from the disadvantaged countries to prospective nations, these emigrants’ purpose is to seek a better life. For example, in Vietnam, there are many villages where almost young villagers go to abroad to live, work, or for something else. They can not find a approach to earn money in their own countries; therefore, they choose to move to other countries, which they think it is the best choice to change their life. And illegal immigration is the cheapest way that they know to turn their purpose coimg true.
Another motivation of illegal immigration is fraud crime. Criminals make money by banned transportation people from one country to another country. These offenders usually come to rural areas, where have low level in law understanding, to convince resident of these places for their money goal. As fraud criminals, many people had left their hometowns to immigrate into another country in a illicist way .
Illegal immigration definitely is prohibited action, in addition, this action also leads to some harsh effects in terms of economy, security, and human life. The large number of people come to a nation by illegal means which will make governments have to pay a lot of budget to solve this problem. Besides, rising crime is also a worried issue for state security. Whereas the largest matter is human life. Nothing can ensure for immigrants existence when they choose moving by irregulation method. Therefore, a lot of heartbroken events had happend and one of them is 39 Vietnamese dead in a frozen container in England at the end of 2019.
Illegal immigration is a serious issue which has made many bad influences for society. However, this is a reality of almost countries in the world. As mentioned above, to earn money for a better life and enticed by criminals are main grounds for this phenomenon. And the sever effects of illegal immigration to a lot of our social aspects are the matters that the world is facing. Countries in the world unites with each other to resolve this problem; whist maybe there must take many years to find out the answer for this issue. Although those difficulties, depend on joining among nations i believe we can do it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, whereas, for example, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2316.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 462.0 315.596192385 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01298701299 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76382785426 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 736.2 506.74238477 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8766053394 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.64 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.48 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.56 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 17.0 3.9879759519 426% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242286193603 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821103174706 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992055154622 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153060580183 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612931160194 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.