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Describe a pet you have

Essay topics: Describe a pet you have

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I have a bulldog, which is the birthday gift my father give me 2 years ago, and we called it Mike. It is medium height, grey color with dark spots near her belly, bushy and glistening eyes. I give Mike some biscuits and milk in the morning, rice and curry in the afternoon. I spend most of my time with the dog after coming back from work. I also have to take care of the medicines of the dog because it was remaining very ill in the past. Walking around the garden with Mike is my pleasure after a working day under pressure.

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Average: 7.5 (4 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 342, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...h the dog after coming back from work. I also have to take care of the medicines...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 424.0 1615.20841683 26% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 103.0 315.596192385 33% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.11650485437 5.12529762239 80% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.18573250055 4.20363070211 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10547585136 2.80592935109 75% => OK
Unique words: 72.0 176.041082164 41% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.699029126214 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 135.9 506.74238477 27% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 11.3639292892 49.4020404114 23% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.6666666667 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0548942709254 0.244688304435 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0255445927267 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361689297213 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0548942709254 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 13.0946893788 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 50.2224549098 158% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.32 12.4159519038 51% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 78.4519038076 20% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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