Hard work versus Luck
I firmly can't help contradicting this view that achievement is because of difficult work. My view point I might want to say on the actual start like all extraordinary essayists like William Shakespeare who tell their principle thought in starting itself. It is a typical proposition, rather a confusion that achievement is because of difficult work. Work obviously difficult work never. You do an agreeable movement for explicit time, or times and it is something like a piece of your being, not actually work. While doing that action, you take care od your body xnd study its rhythms, in light of the fact that by n9 nezns you cannit conflict with your body. The idea of difficult work gives more accentuation to the outcome than the way to that thus the actual thought is an uncertain one, and I think this has been sent to those deplorable youthful people from prong to prong by individuals whose vision is divided. Indeed the general public over the long haul won't get advantages by difficult work, however shrewd work with appropriate rest. A similar standard is material to people moreover.
So going to that pleasant action
One should like that, else it is acceptable to revamp courses and locate another pleasurable thing from the plenty of invigorating subjects on earth.
Allow us to see, what befalls these supporters of difficult work. They will fill in a specific neighborhood and may discover cash or notoriety in the previously mentioned course yet they will abruptly become undesirable from life's flows, which is strong to well meaning goals by and large and not difficult work in uncommon. They will presumably confront tension in different zones like connections or social importance.
So something clueless comes in their excursion and pulls them down, and these sorry humans and troubled. First think, for what reason are you entranced towards difficult work. Presumably the brain is wired that way, and the individual can't ti leave that oblivious hold.
Figure what do you need in life-achievement or cash or satisfaction. I would better pick the remainder of these things. Indeed, behind each movement in pursuing cash ,you can discover this quest for progress, except if you are paying your PCPs bull.
So what is the point? Fortune favors imbeciles, and this the expression of the versifier upon Avon, not mine. So don't buckle down, day and night, it will just ruin your spine. You, neither the world will be profited out of that work. Work less. Loosen up additional. Smell those rose regularly. Appreciate this little stay. Most likely, you come here just a single time, Who knows-And dream as well. Dream as frequently as could really be expected. Think beyond practical boundaries. Work obviously, yet recall that my thought, that was referenced at the outset Enjoyable action. Furthermore, consistently do it in suitable settings. With companions, your living ones. Dear companion, absolutely never envision life as another conquerable mountain hanging tight for your trip. It isn't so. You may be tricked by another who thus was duped. That is a cycle we can break.
Your demeanor to life chooses the excursion and the methods embraced for that. See more rose nurseries, if conceivable read those great books, converse with individuals who are more astute than you, appreciate those night shows, and meanwhile discover your motivation and energy. Who instructed you that difficult work is the rule for progress. Suggest him for a high level training meeting from commendable people. Then, perform your responsibility and appreciate the excursion. Recollect the poet Fortune favors fools.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
I firmly cant help contradicting this view that achie...
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to contradict' or 'contradict'.
Suggestion: to contradict; contradict
I firmly cant help contradicting this view that achievement is because o...
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Message: The adverb 'never' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...ult work. Work obviously difficult work never. You do an agreeable movement for expli...
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Suggestion: Indeed,
...by individuals whose vision is divided. Indeed the general public over the long haul w...
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
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Suggestion:
...er. So going to that pleasant action One should like that, else it is accepta...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...n is wired that way, and the individual cant ti leave that oblivious hold. Figur...
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Suggestion: ,
...d, behind each movement in pursuing cash ,you can discover this quest for progress...
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Suggestion: don't
...f the versifier upon Avon, not mine. So dont buckle down, day and night, it will jus...
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Message: Did you mean 'this rose' or 'those rises', 'those roses'?
Suggestion: this rose; those rises; those roses
... Work less. Loosen up additional. Smell those rose regularly. Appreciate this little stay....
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Suggestion: you're; you are
... in suitable settings. With companions, your living ones. Dear companion, absolutely...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...ountain hanging tight for your trip. It isnt so. You may be tricked by another who t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, then, thus, well, while, i think, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 22.0 7.30460921844 301% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 72.0 24.0651302605 299% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3046.0 1615.20841683 189% => OK
No of words: 593.0 315.596192385 188% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13659359191 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93473315629 4.20363070211 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71472875708 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 348.0 176.041082164 198% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586846543002 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 895.5 506.74238477 177% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 5.43587174349 313% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 42.0 16.0721442886 261% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.6298579973 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5238095238 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.119047619 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7619047619 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 8.67935871743 242% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11591942573 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324616247743 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584261762811 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0440211363602 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458946477074 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 146.0 78.4519038076 186% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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