Many young people leaving school think that going to university will give them higher wages, superior career prospects and greater job satisfaction. However, they would do better to get a job and start earning as soon as possible.Do you agree or disagree?

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Many young people leaving school think that going to university will give them higher wages, superior career prospects and greater job satisfaction. However, they would do better to get a job and start earning as soon as possible.
Do you agree or disagree?

Over the last few years, everybody concerns about their future life or career. Some people claim that everything mostly depends on their education. In their point, going to the university can give them superior career prospects and higher wages. However, most young people are likely to find a job in a short time rather than going to higher school. I drastically disagree with this point of view. In this essay, I am going to support my view with examples.

First of all, going to university or its education leads to an increase in earning capacity, a wide range of opportunities. It is obvious that university graduates have a better of aspect of being selected for a job rather than unassuming people who did not attend university. It means that employers prefer to university graduates because a higher education estimates the skills and qualities of them.

Secondly, in recent days, keeping family has more more difficult. What I mean by this is that many of people often encounter with financial problems. That is why they are tend to get a job in a short time. In contrast, after graduating from university and having a degree of it, young people can get a good job with great salary.

To sum up, a growing number of people’s opinion, finding a job as soon as possible is better than going to university. In my point, they do not think that this job is temporary in most cases. Everybody should attend in university, because it is intrinsic for their future career.

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keeping family has more more difficult
keeping family is more more difficult

That is why they are tend to get a job
That is why they tend to get a job

after graduating from university and having a degree of it,
after graduating from university and having a degree,

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