Membership Recruitment
What do you want to learn and develop for yourself? And how can we support that?
What I want to learn and develop for myself is how to communicate with other people and how to work effectively. I prefer hanging out to talk to friends than chatting through social network or message. However, I often fall into the awkard case. I don't know what I could say to strengthen the conversations. Even sometimes, the conversation will not amazing as I imagine. I need to focus on goals I would like to achieve and how I can use my time in the possible way. As I can see from booklet, I think your organization have the versatile environment I desire to become a different person I used to be. What is more, I also can expand relationships and have friends who are fully experienced and kind. Although I also have some shortcomings, I believe your organization will help me be more active, more mature and have many factors of global citizen.
Which field do you want to work in the future? And why
I would like to join in working the field "project management". Because I like organizing events, programs. I usually watch some variety shows especially Korea, China or America shows and I'm into that producers create their shows and bring audiences about relaxing and entertainment. So if I become a member of your organization, I think I will have a chance to learn about building a project or an event or running programs and know how to plan amazing and atractive contents for everybody as well.
Share with us your strengths and weaknesses
My strength is give respectfulness for everyone. I’m trying to listen to their opinion and lend an ear for their difficulties they have to face.
I am honesty in all my relationships. Honesty is essential to make the community become better. I think we can do this through truth telling, truth speaking, truth living, and truth loving. . If you are, you will reap benefits by doing so. Everybody will respect you and willing to help you anytime when you need.
I’m a shy person, which prevents me from public speaking. At that time, I also feel nervous and my voice seems to be getting softer and softer. Maybe because a part I lack confidence.
Please tell us about your biggest failure in the past and how you overcame it?
Honesty, my biggest failure in my life is not trying for something. When I had to make my own decision for study program: normal or all subject in English. Actually, I knew that an international environment would be a perfect condition with many benefits for me and I also wanted. But I thought it was too difficult and full of stress to persue this with the fear of English. I’m not good at English enough to get on this program. So I did not choose it and gave up a better chance. After all, I’m trying to change the way of my thinking, myself as well. Learning to think positively and taking small step by step will help build my confidence. I will move forward to achieve my goals because if you do not try, you will never know.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-12-10 | bmbtran | 93 | view |
| 2018-08-23 | ddtloan@gmail.com | 11 | view |
| 2017-11-14 | noorali.bhayani@srb.gos.pk | 78 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...r, I often fall into the awkard case. I dont know what I could say to strengthen the...
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Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'amaze'
Suggestion: amaze
...en sometimes, the conversation will not amazing as I imagine. I need to focus on goals ...
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Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ially Korea, China or America shows and Im into that producers create their shows ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, well, even so, i think, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65917602996 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9166100054 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584269662921 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.3113961513 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.75 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.