MY LAST SUMMER VACATION IN EUROPE
MY LAST SUMMER VACATION IN EUROPE
All in every one of us, we should have at least a trip to a place where will be stunned and attractive. If it was not good so it is not important because the most interesting thing that we can have the experiences and knowledge about the place we travelled. But sometimes, the unlucky unforeseen matter will happen in our relaxative trip that we cannot know before. Therefore, we need to find the solving way for the plights in our next trip in the afterward. Such as me when I travelled to five countries in Europe in last summer holidays. This trip included my grand mom, my uncle, and my mom and cannot be without me.
Until now, I still remember the first day of ten days in the journey involve five countries there are France, Luxembourg, Belgium, Netherlands and Germany. That was amazing trip to me but…it was just in my imagination. The first problem happened to me was the time of the flight too long and it was up to 12 hours! That was a thing that was really horrible to me. I went to the plane then I realized the nightmare were coming soon to me and it just not only stop at the flight time but also it was the food and the plane smelling because I have got allergic with that. Although I could not eat anything and I often vomit nearly almost all the time on the plane, it was seriously awful flight than ever! When I heard the notification of the steward that the plane will landing in a few minutes later and in my heart at that moment was extremely happy. This feeling was like when you escaped the prison then be free and you won’t have to obey and persecute to anyone else or basically it just tests your endurance. However, after the “maltreat” time I had be reciprocation that I could observe the sightseeing in France was so stunning and great despite the sight was only in the area of Charles-de-Gaulle airport. In the next few hours later, my family took the luggage and left the airports then moved to the hotel to fresh up, take a nap. In that season though the summer but there was still quite cold.
Almost every hotel under four stars in France usually looks quite “poor”, old and sleazy even they did not have a fridge, some snacks or the instant coffee and the kettle for us. Because of the amount of tourist is really crowded and always abundance especially on the occasions such as the National day of France and the summer holidays of everybody on worldwide. The visitors of every each year so much to obviously the hotels in France do not have enough room to rent for tourists to stay. This nation was really famous with its cuisine and Paris was one of the most romantic cities all around the world. However, it extremely illustrious in its sightseeing and historical relics as well. The next day, my family moved to next place was Luxembourg. This country was extra small and Luxembourg government develops the state completely based on the service sector instead of industry like others countries in Europe. Thus that is why the amount of tourist comes to Luxembourg really little. The hotels in this country always look luxurious and “high class” to attract the visitors to travel to there. Although the population and the area of Luxembourg was lowed but not because that the GDP of this state was either low. I seriously surprised when I have known that Luxembourg’s GDP of each person was on the top (107.206 USD/person/year). When I hung out with my family to had a dinner, I could saw many guys were driving the expensive and supercar and you have known that how were they richness. The next location was Belgium, there was have the delicious cuisine like a course that I liked and it was the mussel cooked with butter cream. Especially, here was a place that manufactured the best chocolate in the world and my grand mom bought twenty bars of chocolate to make the gifts for relative people. The following day, my family was present in Netherlands. Why this country had the name like it so because of the surface of Netherlands always locate below the sea level. I had a chance with all family to visit the windmill in there and observed the scene the carpenter created the wooden shoes. Then we went to the place that looks like on TV, this village had a name is Giethoorn and to me, here was the freshest air location in the world. Because the village’s rule was not let their denizen parking their vehicles in the area of the living place. And the following nation also the last state of my family’s journey, it was Germany. If we talk about this country so we all knew that Germany was the strongest nation in Europe and either the fourth strongest state in the world in field of industry. Especially here was born many super football players star like and this country had a dish that I really liked is sausage. My mom and my uncle went to shopping here a lot, they bought much kind of products such as clothes, house applications, boots and headphones in the technology supermarket named Saturn. In Saturn supermarket, I seriously stunned by the hugeness and imposingness of it. In this extent, there was a big location and had “uncountable” brands concentrated in many fields for everyone come here to be stated with pleasure in their waste money inclination is shopping too much. The fact made me surprised was in Germany, the citizen do not buy the mineral outside in mart because the water in Europe always pure enough to drink immediately whenever you are feeling thirsty. Instead of drinking tonic water, the German will buy the sparkling water and they reckoned that the sparkling water was better than drinking normal water. After ten days travelled in dreamy Europe, my family who also felt a fond remembrance of Viet Nam. But any games in our life always have the end and it was time to say goodbye with the magnificent countries in Europe.
When my family moved to Frankfurt airport to ready to came back home, all of members in my family were felt regret because the time in a trip was quite short and flew away really fast. However, this trip was have reached the summit of my hope was travelled to Europe and breath the atmosphere in there. I wish I would have more opportunities to visit more nations in the world with family and have more joy with them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, really, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, at least, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 55.0 13.1623246493 418% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 49.0 10.4138276553 471% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 28.0 7.30460921844 383% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 120.0 24.0651302605 499% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 146.0 41.998997996 348% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 5214.0 1615.20841683 323% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 1130.0 315.596192385 358% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61415929204 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.79788518582 4.20363070211 138% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62563493397 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 475.0 176.041082164 270% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.420353982301 0.561755894193 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1627.2 506.74238477 321% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 28.0 5.43587174349 515% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 12.0 2.10420841683 570% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 47.0 16.0721442886 292% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.042250064 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.936170213 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0425531915 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36170212766 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 30.0 8.67935871743 346% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153049411302 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435221080615 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749144088058 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279269854173 0.151304729494 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.361939690412 0.056905535591 636% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 191.0 78.4519038076 243% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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