Essay topics:
My present
Books are my best favourite presents. At Christmas 2015, I received a book from my brother. This is the first time he has given present for me. The name of book is " Tren Duong Bang" . Maybe he wanted me learn how to improve my skills about the life. My brother made me surprised and happy. The book is thick but i really interested in it because it is funny and meaningful. I love it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... of book is ' Tren Duong Bang' . Maybe he wanted me learn how to improve...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, really
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 41.998997996 14% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 320.0 1615.20841683 20% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 75.0 315.596192385 24% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26666666667 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.94283095638 4.20363070211 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42419704272 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 59.0 176.041082164 34% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.786666666667 0.561755894193 140% => OK
syllable_count: 99.9 506.74238477 20% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 9.0 20.2975951904 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.9874960913 49.4020404114 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 40.0 106.682146367 37% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.375 20.7667163134 45% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.375 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278466848762 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099809168097 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794461294122 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278466848762 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.4 13.0946893788 26% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.72 50.2224549098 175% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.3 11.3001002004 29% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.71 12.4159519038 46% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.19 8.58950901804 72% => OK
difficult_words: 10.0 78.4519038076 13% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 9.78957915832 36% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 10.1190380762 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.33 Out of 6
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