People would like to go to a postsecondary school like a college or university. What do you think are their reasons for attending this type of school? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is no doubt true that attending a university will help us land a decent job or broaden ourselves mind and gain knowledge. This brings about some benefits for our work and life in the future. In my viewpoint, reasons lead to people would like to go to college that we would like to continue to absorb useful knowledge and can make friends easily who have thoughts, views with them.
Initially, learning at a university assists us to study both theoretical and hands-on lessons. At a college, we can absorb beneficial things related to major knowledge or even interesting something in different subjects. Also, it would appear that university teachers provide us with useful information to serve for our work later. Sometimes, they also share strange, interesting opinions to arouse excitement for lessons which make us broaden ourselves mind and feel the humor in the school. Besides, students also discuss many topics around lessons, from this, we might absorb different views. We can enhance soft skills such as teamwork skill, communication, and presentation. For students who learn university, they can improve essential skills which no place can do better than the school environment. We learn everything from teachers, friends, and relationships.
Furthermore, when we go to the colleges where we can make friends easily because of having the peers with us. It is undeniable that friendship is a good relationship which we should have in life. Since friends are the same age as us so we might talk about any themes, share with them our stories, and enjoying common interests. In colleges, having an extracurricular is a regular event; therefore, if we have a group of best friends, we have happiness and fun together with them through trips. We create memories, build great relationships to contact them later. It is worthwhile for us to make friends in university due to friends play an important in each person's life.
In conclusion, it is my firm conviction, going to a college or university is an appropriate choice for people. For the reasons aforementioned, I believe that we should continue to attend any school after secondary school.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 659, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, second, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1806.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10169491525 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91904562288 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562146892655 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6987424259 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0526315789 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6315789474 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57894736842 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179036442693 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566291870074 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702899925231 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151104508244 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942835571131 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.67 Out of 6
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