Some people said that Garment Industry is a traditional industry and that young talents do not have much room to grow there. To what extent do you disagree with this opinion? Give examples and evidence to support your argument.
For most of human history, clothes have been handcrafed. Since Edmund Cartwright invented the machine which wove threads into cloth in 1784, it has been hundreds of years in the development of Garment Industry. It is the reason that many people think this industry is traditional and there is no high growth potential for young talents. I totally disagree with this opinion.
First, fashion is a fast paced industry. In the past, people only needed something to wear, but nowadays, people are increasingly interested in apperance and always want to catch the trend. There are many fashion brands that that bring extremely diverse and abundant collections to consumers in every single year. It can be seen that the fashion industry is never obsolete, and the dynamics of it attracts many young people who want to develop their careers in this industry.
Next, the increase in demand of consumers creates a massive demand in clothing manufacturing and poses challenges for garment companies in meeting the market. To face challenges and growing, companies are always striving to optimize the production and operation. And that requires companies to be effectively structured and organized as well as constantly encouraging employees to develop and contribute. To ensure effective operation, each company has many departments with different functions. This brings tremendous labor demand and creates lots of potential opportunities for young talents to grow with many positions and roles.
Finally, for the existence and development of any company or organization, not just in the apparel industry, we both need experienced individuals to build the development direction and young talents who are not afraid to come up with innovative ideas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38827838828 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87901369 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582417582418 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3723462876 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.071428571 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21428571429 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160547351146 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588038394834 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661088382344 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095639092161 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487542259286 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.67 Out of 6
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