To some people studying the past is the best to help young people function well in the modern world. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures could be effective in helping young people to function well in the modern world?
People live in the present. They plan for and worry about the future. History, however, is the study of the past. Given all the demands that press in from living in the present and anticipating what is yet to come. Therefore, to some people studying the past has high value in this modern age of globalization. They think that young people function well by studying the past. If it is so, are there any other measures in helping young people to function well in the modern world?
In present times, it seems that examining the past could be unbelievably valuable in terms of understanding of our contemporary universe problems. There is a saying that suggests that "history repeats itself". For this reason if people delve into history, examine it without leaving any detail behind, they will have more opportunities to anticipate forthcoming problems and it is likely undeniable those problems would be solved very easily. Human conflicts, inventions and socials issues in all the ages are quite similar and this is what makes the study of past so important.
Through the study of history and learning about the past, people are better able to understand how the present has come to be. For instance, in order to understand how the United States became a country, as well as the foundations on which it was built, one must learn the history of America's founding fathers, and the world that shaped their ideas and beliefs. The study of history also enables people to learn from past mistakes. For example, analyzing the mistakes made by armies in World War II can help the military improve strategies in future wars.
Beside all the aforementioned, many people acknowledge the major role of Education in the modern life to all individuals in the society. It has enabled societies to prosper both socially and economically by enabling them to develop common culture and values. So, gaining education enhances an individual to live a respectful life in the society. Because education offers a setting in which culture and values of a society are developed. In this respect, education in modern society provides a forum where the society examines its issues and identifies solutions.
To sum up, based on reasons mentioned above, Learning and studying the past is the first step to build a better future. In addition, there are some other factors such as good Education that are needed by all people especially young people to build their nationality and motivate them to contribute to their country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2106.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 421.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00237529691 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66512335848 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524940617577 0.561755894193 93% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3464551749 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7272727273 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1363636364 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356722733953 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10824903682 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135270380992 0.0667982634062 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193898460538 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155174935741 0.056905535591 273% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.