Team sports are general promoted as a great way to keep fit and build character. However, sporting events such as soccer matches are often accompanied by violence between rival supporters and other forms of antisocial behavior. If sporting events can lead

Essay topics:

Team sports are general promoted as a great way to keep fit and build character. However, sporting events such as soccer matches are often accompanied by violence between rival supporters and other forms of antisocial behavior. If sporting events can lead to antisocial behavior, can team sports really be good for us?

(This essay is for PTE exam.)

Sports have been always the way of entertainment and bringing people together. There are various forms of sports played all around the world but nowadays events like soccer matches have become the topic of discussion as supporters of each team often end up in violence creating several misbehaviors. However, taking the majority in consideration, in my opinion, sporting events have been always supported and played successfully.

There are various reasons why sporting events can be good for us. First of all, it helps us to reunite for the society as well as for the country. Whenever there is a sport event either locally or internationally, people are excited and overwhelmed to see and support their teams. By this, people come together and forget their anger and sorrows. For example, in world cup football which is held every five year, it can be seen that thousands of people go to watch the match and show their support. Moreover, sports are good for health when played regularly. People are busy in their life and some of them do not like workout in gym. As a result, games have been their choice allowing them the regular exercises that make life easy and comfortable.

Yet, some people argue that sports are creating more violence and anger because of which young generation are turning up toward negative behaviors and attitudes. They believe that although sports are played with a lot of excitement and enjoyment, there are many incidents where fights have been broke down either between players or audiences. Nevertheless, in many ways, sports have more benefits. If rules and regulations are followed, sports can be regarded as one of the best forms to bring people together along with other various advantages.

In conclusion, everything has both positive and negative aspects. It would be unrealistic to anticipate all the positive outcomes from sports. Therefore, minimizing conflicts related with sports, it should be played to bring positive results.

Votes
Average: 8.5 (4 votes)
Essay Categories

Comments

because of which young generation are turning up
because of which young generations are turning up

Therefore, minimizing conflicts related with sports, it should be played to bring positive results.
Therefore, by minimizing conflicts related with sports, it should be played to bring positive results.

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 4.5 out of 6 or equal to 7.0 out of 9 in IELTS
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 02
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 322 350
No. of Characters: 1611 1500
No. of Different Words: 187 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.236 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.003 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.546 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 122 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 83 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 56 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.889 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.866 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.556 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.303 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.495 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.107 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5