As the technology is highly developed working hours should be reduced. Do you agree or disagree?
I agree with this. Because if we make an effort to develop the technology, it must have benefits to us. There are many benefits of technology in our daily life, but we must take advantages of technology for our resting hours.
The world develops day-to-day. The technology developes too and it affects our life. Also we aware of problems about working hours. There are so much people who are overworking. It is unfair. In my opinion, if the humanity develops things which related with world, the people must see their benefits. I mean that, technology developers work so hard for improving the standards of life; for reducing the difficulties of our life. Therefore, we must reduce the working hours. The modern technologies can do our job instead of us. For example, today the cashier checks the money at the end of the workday. However, the robots can check the money on the cash. We can make easy our life if we really want.
However, it does not depend on the development of technology. We must reduce the daily working hours. It is too much for our health. I think, we must not work much, instead of that we can work short but productive. It is better than work much and be exhausted. As I read in article the human body wants to rest from 1pm to 4pm. In the Madrid, Spain, the people go home for a lunch and take a nap between 1 and 4. I mean that, we can work everyday from 9am to 6pm, but it will deplete our life energy after one point. My view is that the work must operate under the command of life. The most important thing in the world is our health.
At the end, I want to say that either helping of technology or other things, we must reduce the working hours. Otherwise, the life can be tedious and short.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, therefore, for example, i mean, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41379310345 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40675601664 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504702194357 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 5.43587174349 313% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0222139979 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.1481481481 106.682146367 49% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.8148148148 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 3.4128256513 440% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159543937797 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515393081084 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435824695806 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114514177795 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0133655114419 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 13.0946893788 40% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 50.2224549098 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 11.3001002004 46% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.41 12.4159519038 60% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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