topic: describe education goal and what you need to do achieve it
That becoming a businessman is my dream when I was a little girl. Entering university, ftu2, with the major in business, I have achieved a part of my goal. Next time, detail is about 3 years, I want to get 7.5 ielts and get university degree in A level. I know that this path will be not an easy one and there will be challenges with me. However, believing that if I keep eyes in the way and work towards it, even with obstacles in my way, I am able to achieve my goal to make a better life for my family and myself.
To achieve this goal, there are a lot of difficult things and works I need to do. To get 7,5 ielts, I will study English centre next time and at the same time, I also will taught myself at home. I will improve all skills, particular in speaking skill and writing skill because I’m bad in it and it is really necessary for my job in the future. Moreover, to get university degree in A level, I have to study hard more and more,concerntrate in class, do more research in subjects, get to meet with new people in the school who will assist me with my studies, satisfy my curiosity in the subject, build up my confidence, improve my skills and lastly provide more technological tools and information that are well related to my course. Besides, I think I will do part-time jobs to know more knowledge and understand how to organize a company.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'teach'
Suggestion: teach
... time and at the same time, I also will taught myself at home. I will improve all skil...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 431, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , concerntrate
...evel, I have to study hard more and more,concerntrate in class, do more research in subjects,...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, lastly, moreover, really, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2984496124 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59804729915 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.0704724091 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.9 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0903230862844 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530515217914 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861994971601 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751515663914 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00468026952089 0.056905535591 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.96 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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