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what are the advantages and disadvantage of using the internet?
The Internet is indeed a wonderful, amazing and brilliant gift that has been given by science or technology to humans in this century. However, the Internet is a collection of diverse services and resources. Therefore people are completely depended and seriously addicted to using this powerful tool called the Internet. And, also like to spend plenty of time surfing on the Internet. There are some advantages and disadvantages of using the Internet.
Firstly, the main advantages of the Internet are communication, and access to information. Initially, the Internet has...
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Sentence: Firstly, people who sitting in front of computer for long period of time may also damage their eyes and posture.
Description: A WH-pronoun, nominative is not usually followed by a verb, present participle or gerund
Suggestion: Refer to who and sitting
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