What should we do to draw more children to outdoor activities instead of playing electronic games too much?
It is an irrefutable fact that children nowadays are using more technology in their daily life and spending less time outdoors than ever before, which can do harm to their physical as well as mental health. Therefore, it is vital that parents find ways to encourage their children to play outside their homes. And here are some ideas which are believed to be useful for them.
Firstly, a healthy environment needs to be established by controlling kids’ technology consumption and creating or finding a suitable outdoor space. More specifically, parents can limit their children’s time on electronic devices by setting a curfew for these equipments such as requiring them to be used no more than 30 minutes per day. Additionally, it is advisable for fathers and mothers to give their offsprings a kid-friendly space like a backyard or a safe and pleasant playground. This way will not only reduce the amount of time children spend on media devices but also give them a suitable place to play.
The second method is that children are provided with fun outdoor options. There are a variety of activities which kids may be keen on such as backyard campout, gardening and sports. Moreover, parents can convert household chores to fun, shoveling snow to make a snowman to take as an example. Also, adults need join in these actions together with their children, which encourages kids to take interests in outdoor activities as well as bonds the relationship between family members.
In conclusion, it is essential that parents get their kids to play outdoors by bringing them a friendly, healthy environment accompanied with fun outdoor choices.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11439114391 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85528751031 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594095940959 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6287152204 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158337612336 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059787110914 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041423016391 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102010931241 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00435143608065 0.056905535591 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.67 Out of 6
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