Which factors contribute to the success of a business
Today, it can be seen that : Economic and social are more and more develope. Vietnam has more and more many famous businesses, both domestic company and foreign company . In order to maintain and develop businesses, it is indispensable to have the following factors:
Firstly, one of the important factors is that Business makes a difference to the products that your business offers in the market, Make customers see the advantages of that product. When the product is good, quality, the demand of the buyer is very much. This creates a unique product brand for your company. Not only did the company's revenue increase, but it also helped businesses become more and more famous and successful.
For example: Customer’s demand is find a product make whitening face skin which make by natural and bring many effective. To respone customer’s demand, Company creat a unique product and have many customer know, buy and use. Lead to, company more and more develop with this product.
Secondly, another factor is to work professionally. Being an entrepreneur needs to be confident and change your mind . Know how to use your time effectively , both at work and at rest. In addition , Entrepreneurs are often able to adapt quickly to unplanned changes . And the most important thing is that they realize their weaknesses and find ways to fix them quickly.
Finally, Enterprises need to listen to customers' opinions . Customers' opinions can also contribute to the development of the business. Enterprises must make customers feel they are important people. When businesses create trust for customers, customers will also trust businesses and always support their products.
In short, with these factors, I think it will contribute to the business becoming more successful, and growing more. More over, it help we can competition with diffrent company and maintain quantity customer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in addition, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29333333333 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8673414366 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.8482087696 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358227410494 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521695678573 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0630095669426 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449451169035 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.67 Out of 6
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