You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice.

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You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice.

Moneys is a very imperative factor in today’s world. For every basic to important need, we required money. Although money cannot buy everything but it does bring almost everything. It is treated next important thing after god as it is said – It is always comfortable to cry in a limousine then crying on the cycle. If finance is so vital, it must be used in a way which should increase it. There are various option available to invest such as – stock, shares, gold, property but none can generate continuous benefit or benefit which would be more than double the amount of investment like business. I would prefer to invest my finance in business considering personal, financial and professional benefits.

After reading fat books with valuable certificate all of us desire to get a lucrative job. Definitely, we want good return of our investment but in my opinion running your company is much better than working for somebody’s company. Although investment of opening a business would be big but benefits of that investment will be equally immense. Which cannot be incurred by investing in house. Also one need to pay maintenance charges every year whether he is using that house or not, which is very much like an expense and not income. On the other hand if business is carried out impeccably, it produces income. With the same income one can expand his business, which cannot be possible with already build house and in case it can be expanded it will be at healthy cost. Income from business will certainly make us capable to buy house but House income would not be enough to construct a business. If investment in business promises better returns, why to invest unwisely? A wise investment is the one, which not only give good returns but also opportunities to increase your source of income.

Investing in house will give us shelter and satisfaction of owning your own place but as it will be used its value will depreciate. On the hand business, if operated properly delivers consistent profit, which can be used for its maintenance. Also it will give precious experience and motivation to achieve more in life, adding to it will robust our competitive skills as every business owner required to face competition to run his trade. Also with investing in business, you would provide employment to many people which will be a very good contribution to the society .When we own a thing we are affection to it and we protect it with great care.

Investment in business not only make you financially strong but do teach us various skills like risk – bearing technique, management, public relation and many more. And no investment could be better than the investment which produces multi –benefits like Investing in business.

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A wise investment is the one, which not only give good returns but also opportunities to increase your source of income.
A wise investment is the one, which gives not only good returns but also opportunities to increase your source of income.

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