In recent years, whether young employees have more skills, knowledge and more motivated than older employees have sparked a heated debate. Although such issued is contested by many, it is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. In my opinion, I am inclined to believe that any company needs both experienced professionals and fresh graduates to succeeded, and I will elaborate in the following essay.
To begin with, young employees brings new technologies and skills learned to a company which later pass on to the older employees. According to one of my studies which I conducted in university, 62% of graduates are hired each year to participate in new projects and development either in private or public sectors. Hence, young employees are the risk takers who have strong ambitions to achieve their dreams, which ultimately rolls the company forward and brings motivation to others on the same track.
On the other hand, it is impossible to deny the importance of experienced employees who often bring inspiration stories with their loyalty to an organisation. These older workers had experienced in challenging situations and act as the mentors for the young employees to guide them through difficult times. For instance, the pioneer company, Google, value their long-term serviced employees with higher salaries and greater benefits, which in term seeks their advice on making great decisions. Therefore, older workers are valuable assets for an organisation to succeed.
In conclusion, according to the above points, young blood teaches older employee knowledge and information on the latest technologies and skills, while older employee contributes guidance and experiences. Thus, the combination of both young and experienced workers is the key factor to make a team work more efficient and to increases company’s productivity.
- The government should allocate more funding to teaching sciences rather than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree? 78
- Effective learning requires time, comfort and peace, so it is impossible to combine study and employment. Study and employment distract one from another. To what extent do you think the statements are realistic? Support your opinion with examples. 88
- Some people argue that experience is the best teacher Life experiences can teach more effectively than books or formal school education How far do you agree with this idea Support your opinion with reasons and or your personal experience 59
- City are now expanding the government should make better network for public transport or should build more roads to facilitate car ownership Agree or disagree 94
- Some people think the purpose of education is to prepare the future workforce and make good members of society. Others think the purpose of education should lead to self-fulfillment. What is your opinion? 77
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1207.87684729 133% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51712328767 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03226496101 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 139.433497537 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595890410959 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.887328698 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.25 104.977214359 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.25397266985 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195661909614 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732444528119 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927157419763 0.071462118173 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12301934222 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049400947383 0.0609392437508 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 12.6369458128 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 11.5310837438 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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