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2)Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced
diet is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

The kind of lifestyle one maintains leads to the growth and development of one’s own life. There are
several options out there in today’s world for everybody to choose from to maintain a healthy
lifestyle with respect to this fact I personally believe that exercising in any type can keep us away
from a lot of diseases going around in the present world
On One hand, exercising has now in the modern world has grown from basic to multiple forms of
exercising. When people engage themselves in walking, swimming, running, or any kind of calorie
a burning activity they tend to have better mental and physical health, for e.g.- Getting up early doing
an exercise of walking or running for half an hour can help in on active and a better start to the day.
Secondly, historically it’s proven that people who exercise and eat healthily prevent themselves from
common diseases such as obesity and stress. They tend to sleep better and hence become
productive. The key to a healthy life has always been good eating habits such as including fiber and
protein in their diet and avoiding unhealthy sleep and food patterns.
It’s imperative that we recognize that regularity of exercise or a balanced diet is a necessary element
to have a healthy mind body and soul.
In conclusion, People who maintain a healthy life by exercising, and maintaining a balanced diet tend to live
longer happier and become more productive because of the number of hours they get to hold on
for themselves. It’s essential to provide yourself with the vitamins, nutrients, proteins, and
carbohydrates that your body needs.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0258302583 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65779502644 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590405904059 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.5024630542 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.853798137 50.4703680194 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.333333333 104.977214359 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1111111111 20.9669160288 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.25397266985 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.12807881773 436% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137879040822 0.242375264174 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539338751812 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418595333841 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0401907761249 0.151781067708 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350356549323 0.0609392437508 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 12.6369458128 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.94827586207 201% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.3980295567 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.0 Out of 90
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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