One of the conspicuous trends today's world is a colossal upsurge in number of people that video games is bad for children because they spend more time on games and ignore study.There a widespread worry that this will lead to a myriad of concern in one's life. However, I do not entirely accept this. I will explain why in this essay. There are a number of arguments in favor of my stance. Most preponderant one is that video games are increase the brain power of children as well as they become active and there a numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only one benefits more when it comes to being effective, but they can enhance productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal factor in the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, when only one follows such a system, can they broaden their horizons, thus learning attributes as dedication and perseverance, it is apparent why many are in favor video games becomes children active. Ii the views of arguments outlined above, one can concluded that the benefits of video games are indeed too great ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 235.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80425531915 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64832001721 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.7099721883 50.4703680194 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.9 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.12807881773 48% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187877601634 0.242375264174 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619631294038 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673166176127 0.071462118173 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15152772248 0.151781067708 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00574777391479 0.0609392437508 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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