Animal rights are the most important. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages
Recently, animal right has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question "what are the advantages and disadvantages of it?". Whereas it is a widely held view that it is not beneficial, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the ecological standpoint, environment is bound up inextricably with live habitat, which indicates they lead to both animal and human being. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2018 demonstrates the relationship between animal law protection and nature conservation as well as an exponential increase in environmental damages. Their academic criticism was impressive. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of livestock right is correlated positively with not only extinct species but also domestic animals.
Within the realm of society, without the slightest doubt, welfare laws attribute to animal lovers, in that it would come down to food preparation, cloth industry, and export trade. A salient example of such attribution is leather industry, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take pet shop for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint animal abusing problems. Likewise, hardly had they confined their attention to pet ethnic, pet owner, and even natural right. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of tough regulation.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes "all's well that ends well," after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that the advantages of it outweigh its disadvantages. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, likewise, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 278.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75179856115 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12872726842 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 139.433497537 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690647482014 0.580463131201 119% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2871000191 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167224826897 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456795907493 0.0925447433944 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545267528987 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978887546276 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738450274458 0.0609392437508 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 12.6369458128 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.07 11.5310837438 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.59 8.32886699507 127% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 55.0591133005 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.94827586207 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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