Being a journalist is one of the most difficult jobs in the world. To what extent do you agree with it ?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in being a journalist is one of the most difficult jobs in the world. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one's life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay. There are a number of arguments in
favor
of my stance. The most preponderant one is that being a
journalist
is one of the most difficult jobs in the world can not only contribute to but also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease
,
efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned. There are, however some pitfalls that easily overwhelm the potential benefits of being a journalist is one of the most difficult jobs in the world. The primary one stems from the fact that by observing the aforementioned trend, people have not only
realized
its gravity, but also gauged the magnitude of its repercussions when it comes to today's ever-changing lifestyle. Beside, its impact on is far-reaching indeed.
Hence
,
it is apparent why many are against being a journalist is one of
the
most difficult jobs in the world. In view of the arguments outlined
above, one can conclude that despite some drawbacks, the benefits of being a
journalist
in one of the most difficult jobs in the world are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 270.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82222222222 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78402783502 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485185185185 0.580463131201 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9455563439 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 7.25397266985 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.12807881773 218% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.436535077441 0.242375264174 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165377886014 0.0925447433944 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.17428076487 0.071462118173 244% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197426963897 0.151781067708 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0932666857081 0.0609392437508 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 69.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 62.5 Out of 90
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