The claim that animals have rights has been subject of much debate since the 1970s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals?
should be banned? Do you agree or disagree?
Animal rights are increasingly entering our topics of controversy. While some skeptics may maintain the belief that zoos are hurting animals, there are explanations behind why zoos can help animals. This essay will discuss why zoos are beneficial to species and assert that zoos should not be prohibited.
There are various reasons why animals get hurt in zoos. For instance, animals may be indulged in zoo by manual feeding and their hunting skills are lost. Some animals born in zoos do in fact face difficulties on rehabilitating to the nature. Having said that, the percentage of its occurrence is insignificant.
On the other hand, there are various reasons why zoos should help animals. Some species are targets of illegal hunters and, as a result, these animals are endangered. It is well-known that, by keeping pandas in zoos, scientists have saved these rare mammals in China. Therefore, zoos are intuitively perceived as shelters for endangered species.
Given that zoos have their significance on protecting animals from extinction, in my opinion, zoos should not be banned.
In conclusion, some people may think zoos deter animals from learning life skills, and this violates animal rights, but I believe zoos have important roles to play on protecting wildlife. Therefore, they should not be banned.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 210.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30952380952 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7736572613 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604761904762 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7759467708 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6428571429 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.25397266985 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319641639323 0.242375264174 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114859336602 0.0925447433944 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541247822723 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19722164586 0.151781067708 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378391041539 0.0609392437508 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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