Computer technology has had more of a negative than a positive impact on society
How far do you agree with this statement? Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience.
Nowadays computers have become a part of our lives and the work it covers cannot be replaced by any other machine. Some argued that the impacts of computer technology on society are more negative than positive. Here I’m going to discuss my opinions on above matter.
To begin with, few decades ago almost all the work was done by manual. Although there were computers but, they were not very much user friendly. The other problem was lack of technological people who were capable of handling computers. Hence computers were not very much popular in that period. But with the development of technology now it has become a part of our lives. Most of the highly usable functions are now computerized including banks, education, medical treatments and so on.
Furthermore computers have a lot of positive effects on society. Firstly, it enhances the efficiency of all work such as no queues in banks etc. On the other hand it reduces number of files especially in government offices. Moreover, with the internet facility computers give the opportunity for students gain knowledge without reading numbers of pages.
In contrast, computers make human life more complicated and artificial. Children are now addicted to virtual computer games, so that they don’t like playing outside games. This will affect their physical fitness badly. Most people are now refused to read books because, they can find whatever they want by a minute. Finally because of computers, most of the employment opportunities are decreasing which is now becoming a huge problem.
To conclude computer technology has both pros and cones. But I think if the user knows it’s limits it has more benefits than negative effects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...tion, medical treatments and so on. Furthermore computers have a lot of positive effect...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, i think, in contrast, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 278.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17985611511 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6861232305 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 139.433497537 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651079136691 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6551724138 158% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.706606968 50.4703680194 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.0 104.977214359 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9 20.9669160288 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160442291446 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048615743291 0.0925447433944 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526763528642 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925545697117 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315298603796 0.0609392437508 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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