Congestion in cities has become one of the major problems
Congestion in cities has become one of the major problems in cities nowadays. This will lead to more environmental problems if not addressed as quickly as possible. There should be proper planning and solutions for this issue. One of the most suggested solutions is to provide the architecture for more train routes.
Building sky trains are more interesting than the underground trains. In the sky trains, we will be able to see the environment around us and can enjoy the view of nature. But most importantly, the way for sky trains will be safer than underground trains. There are many possibilities for theft or crimes to happen in underground subways. So it is always preferable to use the sky train routes.
Mainly, introducing more train routes to the different parts of the city will reduce the usage of car and own vehicles. It will save time, fuel and also will help to reduce Noise and Air pollution which is created due to this congestion and overuse of its own vehicles. When the government provides the best architecture and Train routes to different parts of the city with attractive prices and concession, most people will prefer to use Trains.
To culminate the given points it is very high time to plan and build sky trains which run overhead, which will give a safer and enjoyable journey and will also be efficient in reducing the congestion in the cities. Hence the government should take necessary steps in allocating budget to build better architecture and turn our nation into pollution-free .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... and turn our nation into pollution-free .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91439688716 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76521798471 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536964980545 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0177402673 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2142857143 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.71428571429 7.25397266985 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178461738691 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857386750418 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.217308040823 0.071462118173 304% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128098642252 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.162341731205 0.0609392437508 266% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.